I really like the way your characterization is panning out. The way you've explored Sachiko's character is very intriguing. Her feelings of detachment from her family must be all too common in real-life mothers/wives, so I think that gives her an especially genuine feel. As for L... Well, I can't NOT love him, and your portrayal is fantastic.
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Date: 2008-06-04 02:33 am (UTC)Will keep reading/commenting! :D