I screwed up the review in fanfiction so I'm reviewing here. Gotta say, Nana-san, the delay of the whole thing got me wiree up again. Watari was pretty strong here and I like how he was both perceptive but a little bit disapproving at the same time. But the domestic argument was my favorite part. I swear that I can hardly breathe when I was reading Soichiro and how angry he is and yet I am also angry at Sachiko even though I understand why she did it. Dammit, almost forgot the part that Ryuuzaki was using her first before it became more than that.
Love the opening paragraph about how you descibed L's reputation and how delicate it is and easy to shatter. I've always been curious how L feels like being criticized especially when it comes to his progress and failures.
Nana-san! The dramatic quality is getting thicker!
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Date: 2008-03-04 01:14 am (UTC)Love the opening paragraph about how you descibed L's reputation and how delicate it is and easy to shatter. I've always been curious how L feels like being criticized especially when it comes to his progress and failures.
Nana-san! The dramatic quality is getting thicker!