Mello just doesn't want to see the look of smug relief on Sayu's face when she finds out that she is loved enough to be saved, and he is not.
Mello and Sayu..wow, you captured such liberating emotions in them that made me gasp as I read along. Suddenly the passages are blurred and there's a moment of clarity, like an established trust between them and I can seriously see this happening to Sayu. I mean, she didn't become post-traumatic without something to be traumatized about. And Matt suggesting computer games is so like him. I think he recommended it because it can be cathartic. And Sayu needs one...so does Mello. The moment between them was bitterly engaging and I just sigh once in a while.
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Date: 2008-06-22 06:55 am (UTC)Mello and Sayu..wow, you captured such liberating emotions in them that made me gasp as I read along. Suddenly the passages are blurred and there's a moment of clarity, like an established trust between them and I can seriously see this happening to Sayu. I mean, she didn't become post-traumatic without something to be traumatized about. And Matt suggesting computer games is so like him. I think he recommended it because it can be cathartic. And Sayu needs one...so does Mello. The moment between them was bitterly engaging and I just sigh once in a while.
You've done great. It's one of the best so far.