Emotional void torments a genius mind...Oh L Lawliet! How could people scorn you for making a slight mistake that you never anticipated or intended to commit but simply happened along the way? Doesn't your hunger to connect deserve to be filled? There's always a sadness about you that remains incomprehensible. You know now that things are out of your hands sometimes and this error would condemn you! Oh L Lawliet!!!
*still grieving*
Nana-san...this is so PAINFUL! I don't even want to read anymore but I still do for the sake of knowing what's happening now...but still...this chapter is unbearable! It's so cruel and...goddammit! But overall, it's a very significant change of pace and mood...and as much as it brings me sorrow, it's a very productive chapter and thank you for writing this story. It's...beautiful prose, truly. Your portrayal of L in a very fluent language of human emotion (which he never revealed in the original Ohba work) is blissful and...hollow at the same time!
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Date: 2008-08-02 06:03 pm (UTC)*still grieving*
Nana-san...this is so PAINFUL! I don't even want to read anymore but I still do for the sake of knowing what's happening now...but still...this chapter is unbearable! It's so cruel and...goddammit! But overall, it's a very significant change of pace and mood...and as much as it brings me sorrow, it's a very productive chapter and thank you for writing this story. It's...beautiful prose, truly. Your portrayal of L in a very fluent language of human emotion (which he never revealed in the original Ohba work) is blissful and...hollow at the same time!
[posted in FFNet as a review :p]