Chuck Palahniuk makes my heart skip beats when I read his prose...and so did this one in particular.

To be quite honest, I've been lurking in dn_contest and reading and adding to memories all your works of fiction. This one is one of them. As well as that other Mikami fic with another second-person narrative..."Leaf?" Now that is another Palahniuk sort of style to me. Reminds me of the passages in Survivor.

And why can't I compare this to Palahniuk prose? It deserves it!!