http://lillyankh.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lillyankh.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sunmoonandspoon 2009-05-05 10:15 pm (UTC)

A wonderful piece; very human and moving.

I particularly like the "unsatisfactory last words" thing, as I have always found it ridiculously cheesy when people give declarations of love or some moving speech as they die - real life is just not like that.

Well done, I loved it.

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