Your writing never fails to amaze me. I'm not familiar with Yu-Gi-Oh canon, though I think that your characterization between Shou and Judai are enough to draw me in. You really know how to write relationships between characters, and there is an intimacy between the two characters that seemingly is unnoticed by Judai. At least, I think that Shou seemed to be incredibly caring towards Judai, more than just friends, or so it seemed. Shou also seemed to be incredibly possessive of Judai, particularly when Judai wanted to duel with Kenzan. I do like how you portrayed both characters, and you really made the work visceral and gripping.