So that was like, good, and stuff? You had a few random typos, but I can't say I take issue with anything else. I appreciate that you addressed Sho's constant kidnappedness. He is one of the many characters who was basically ignored at the end, so the extrapolation was quite nice and quite believable. Bravo, bitchass.
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Date: 2010-10-11 05:02 am (UTC)